What the hell?
Cat!
Did you do this?
Son of a
Look at this mess!
Yes, you!
Don't give me that look!
Caught you, didn't I?
Fine, go hide.
Not in the cabinets, damn it!
Get out of there!
I see you!
Stop backing up!
Got you!
Oh
Now you purr
Silly fluff ball













Comments
If I may: For my own tastes, I'd like to see a little more detail. Just a line or two (Like, what did the cat knock over? Rather than say "this mess," describe in a short line. Something quick, but that gives a nice visual).
Regardless, this is a great little poem that made me smile. Thanks!
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Words are the only bullets in truth's bandolier. And poets are the snipers.
- Dan Simmons, Hyperion
I've always operated under the 'less is more' theory, believing it's up to the reader to create the other half of the work in their mind's eye. Hence the lack of detail not only on this one, but much of what I do. The old 'left up for interpretation' thing all my past teachers drilled into my head repeatedly.
Thanks!
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Nothing matters, and what if it did?
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If it's worth having, it won't come easy...
Unfortunately, most people these days don't know how to fight for what they want, and throw away priceless treasures by walking away like cowards.
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